Tuesday night...
In the murky swamp Fallen over logs are in the water, Croaking sounds echoing, the main animals are... Frogs. They have warts on there backs.
Big slurpy and fat.
''Z Z Z Z-Croak?''
The lilly pad with the frog on it starts to hover over the murky water!
ZOOM!
Out of the swamp one bye one, they catch up to the others zooming through the neighbor hood.
They cannon bomb into a rugby studium.
Then the birds that were pirching on the goal posts are knocked off and killed by the frogs!
2 hours later...
They come to a place with Vraals, ghazts, sand beasts, glus, and reeahs.
There's the Gorl slashing and sliceing and diceing
through the monsters!
The Gorl is an ferce fighter!
luckly the frogs made it through safely.
luckly the frogs made it through safely.
They fall into the stream looking terrerfied!
They are soooooooooooooooooooooooooo board with there pond.
Next tuesday night...
FLYING PUPPIES!!!
I am really proud of you Jerome. You have taken on your goal of not adding too many sound words. You have used some well crafted sentences and thought about the starters. Those creature do scare me though! I am glad they didn't hurt the frogs! I also really like how you leave the reader thinking with your ending.
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