WALT persuade other students to agree with our opinion. This the purpose for my writing.
Success Criteria:
- I plan for a writing task
- I write a variety of sentence lengths with different sentence starters
- Give reasons with detail - use specific words
- I write most topic and high frequency words correctly.
- I use capital letters, fullstops, question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
- Use persuasive language
Drums are better than Guitars.
In my opinion this is why I think drums are better than guitars.
I believe that drums are much better than guitars because drums are what keeps a band in time. There are lots of types of drum sticks
Guitars only make one noise in different chords, but drums make lots of different sounds! You have to plug an electric guitar into an amp to make it work. Drums can’t hurt your fingers, but guitars make your fingers blister and hurt!
There is more pieces to a drum kit then you think, there is a cymbal with holes in it. There is a cymbal on a cymbal, a ton of different crashes and rides, a small tom and a lot more!
So that is why I believe Drums are better than guitars.
Well done Jerome for writing different sentence lengths with different sentence starters. Drums are definately really important for keeping the beat in a band. Next time - you persuasive language sentence starters and add more detail to your main points.
ReplyDeleteI think you have convinced me, Jerome!
ReplyDeleteHi i love how you said a guitar gives you blisters and then on you said that on the drums they don't give you blisters keep up the great work.
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