Persuasive Writing - Term 3 Week 5

WALT persuade other students to agree with our opinion.  This the purpose for my writing.

Success Criteria:

1. I plan for a writing task
2. I write a variety of sentence lengths with different sentence starters
3. Give reasons with detail - use specific words
4. I write most topic and high frequency words correctly.
5. I use capital letters, fullstops, question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
6. Use persuasive language

Drums are better than Guitars.

In my opinion this is why I think drums are better than guitars.

I believe that drums are much better than guitars because drums are what keeps a band in time. There are lots of types of drum sticks

Guitars only make one noise in different chords, but drums make lots of different sounds! You have to plug an electric guitar into an amp to make it work.  Drums can’t hurt your fingers, but guitars make your fingers blister and hurt!

There is more pieces to a drum kit then you think, there is a cymbal with holes in it. There is a cymbal on a cymbal, a ton of different crashes and rides, a small tom and a lot more!

So that is why I believe Drums are better than guitars.

Pets should be allowed in school Term three week four

WALT persuade other students to agree with our opinion.  This the purpose for my writing.

Success Criteria:

1. I plan for a writing task
2. I write a variety of sentence lengths with different sentence starters
3. Give reasons with detail - use specific words
4. I write most topic and high frequency words correctly.
5. I use capital letters, fullstops, question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
6. Use persuasive language

Pets should be allowed in school.

I strongly believe that pets should be allowed in school.

You can stroke your Cat to make you feel happy.

You can also cuddle your dog to make you feel happy.

To entertain the class you can teach your cat or dog to dance or

you can also teach your kitten to piggyback on your cat.

And your dog could play soccer.

For a treat for the dog, it can do parkour and at the end there will be a treat!

Another point is you can get your dog to get your pencil.

Another reason is birds can put a piece of paper in the rubbish.

Dogs can pull the chain to the blind to open the blind, and for the teacher, the teacher's dog can sniff out lollies in students pockets!

So that is why I think pets should be allowed in school.

Skimming reading strategy

WALT skim an unknown text so that we can quickly get an understanding of it.
I can decide if a book has useful information I need, or whether I want to read it for pleasure.
You can look at the cover, blurb, chapters, pictures and index.

Skate boarding! - Week 8

Today is just another normal day at the skate park.
I skate over to the three ramps, I try the big one in the middle!
I'm air born!  I try to pull off a 360, but I fall off my board when I land.

When I'm practicing my grinds, I watch pros do heel flips, impossibles, nollie impossibles and kick flips!
Then I see a guy try to do a caballerial!

My LEGO creations! - Week 5

Here are some of my lego creations!

My monster truck motor.

Black haunted bridge.

Micro houses of microvile.

I made these with no instructions! (but I have done better!)

These are some of the sets I have.

  Lego Atlantis

 Lego Star Wars

 Lego Ninjago

 Lego City

 Lego Monster Fighters


That's just some of my lego!

Area - Week 6

Area is how to measure space inside a shape, for example on minecraft, if you're building a house.
If it is going to be a big house like 7 x 9 seven right across(aka row), nine come right down(aka column).

So work out usimg times tables,

1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9/1	2	3	4	5	6	7

7x9 = 63

Hot wheels! - Week 5

If you think hot wheels are just tin cans with wheels, you're wrong.

You never know how much money they are!

Just look at this pink car, you may think it is so lame but it is the most rare hot wheel in the world!

It is worth 100 thousand dollars, and I am serious!

Here are some of my hot wheels.

 Split vison

Rodzilla

High voltage

Supdog

Tooligan

Volkswagen beetle

None of my hot wheels are rare.

But here are some rare ones!

TIP! Oldness is perfection: If you have an old hot wheels car, it may be worth money!

BYE BYE!